Crit was really helpful! The feedback was pretty much what I imagined it would be. The tutors liked my typography but it didn't provide enough information so they suggested I go back to my initial idea of having the flowers with a card saying 'how much did these flowers REALLY cost someone?'', as well as keeping my type as a strapline. They also suggested I rephrase my type to say 'the UNETHICAL cut flower industry' as not all flowers are sourced unethically and I don't want ethical companies to suffer.