We had our crit today which was helpful. The feedback I got suggested that I play with the headline more, perhaps crossing the text over so that it reflects 'crossing borders' or have it laid across the middle of the double page spread. I want to use a lot of negative space in my layout as this is something I really like in magazine articles. Also perhaps adding some colour as the spread was very black and white.

Over the holidays I am going to work on my editorial illustrations, perhaps do something about Paris as Lenz talks a lot about how she loves living in Paris and how Graphic Design has enabled her to do so.